and She Said ([info]bloodied_quill) wrote,
@ 2006-05-04 14:26:00
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Title: Clutch
Category: fan fiction, one-shot
Genre: tableau (snapshot, drabble)
Rating: PG-13
Date: May 4, 2006

Written for [info]50stories
Theme: #30 - Lust

Pairing: tetsu and hyde of L’Arc~en~Ciel
Disclaimer: I do not own/am not affiliated with L’Arc~en~Ciel, Sony Ki/oon, Danger Crue, etc. This is a work of complete fiction. It’s for fun; I’m not going to make any money off of this. However, this particular story is my own writing, so please do not claim it as yours or repost it without permission.
Word Count: 201
POV: second person (hyde)


On stage, you sweat under hot lights, salt water dampening the layers of your black and white dress. You radiate an energetic passion and clutch your bass for dear life.

The fans scream your name and you love it more than you’ll ever admit. You flirt with me to flirt with them, and their squeals are all the reward you could ever need.

Their eyes are on you, their minds are on you, their hearts are for you. You’ll never disappoint.

Between myself and them—I’m no longer able to distinguish which way the jealousy runs.

In my small and cluttered apartment, you sweat beneath me, salt water dampening my worn blue sheets. You radiate a lust and pleasure and clutch my hair, my shoulders, my hips to keep you steady.

I whisper your name and you love it; it’s written all over your face and in the way you beg me not to stop. You dance with masochism to dance with pleasure, and fingers entwined in your hair as I gasp in incoherent release are all the reward you could ask for.

My eyes are on you, my mind is on you, my heart is for you. You’ll never disappoint.


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[info]xstreetofalice
2006-05-04 06:49 pm UTC (link)
Holy shit. I refuse to believe that you wrote that in like, what? Half hour tops? Or maybe more. I don't know how long I was gone. THIS RIGHT HERE LADIES AND GENTLEMEN is proof as to why I am Ren's fangirl.

Again, I repeat: HOLY SHIT.

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[info]togiretamelody
2006-05-04 09:14 pm UTC (link)
I AM REN'S NUMBER ONE FAN GIRL, YOU'RE SECOND %D

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[info]hoyah
2006-05-04 11:11 pm UTC (link)
xD You have to be first on everyone's list, don't you? 8D Well you are my one and only other half.

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[info]xstreetofalice
2006-05-05 01:13 am UTC (link)
I HAVE THE ICON HOE, SO STEP UP. So that; therefore, makes you second. PLUS. I'm on the Affiliates list. So nyah.

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[info]bloodied_quill
2006-05-05 02:04 am UTC (link)
Play nice, ladies &hearts

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[info]bloodied_quill
2006-05-05 02:04 am UTC (link)
Play nice, ladies &hearts

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[info]bloodied_quill
2006-05-05 02:07 am UTC (link)
*blinks* er. 15, tops. &hearts to Andi; I'm much glad you liked it.

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[info]hoyah
2006-05-04 07:15 pm UTC (link)
@o@ this is full of good lines, woman

You flirt with me to flirt with them

Their eyes are on you, their minds are on you, their hearts are for you.

Oh, the transition...

And the repetition of that line...

I also love the shift from the stage to the bedroom, and how the reactions are the same. >3 You write good smut.

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[info]aoi_shu
2006-05-05 06:43 am UTC (link)
so prettty..
so wonderful..
sigh..
currently incoherent...

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[info]kateriya
2006-05-05 07:49 am UTC (link)
Nicely done! Very pretty; I love the way the live and the bedroom are paralleled. (Randomly, it is also giving me images of hyde joining the throngs of tetsu fangirls.)

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[info]onegreysunrise
2006-05-06 06:11 am UTC (link)
^_^ He is a bit of a tetsu fangirl, the way he's talking. Though picturing him joining the crowd of scary cheering fangirls makes me go *snort* and was not the idea, no. *giggles*
Yes, this would be [info]bloodied_quill being too lazy to change journal log-ins.

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[info]amberkid
2006-05-05 12:55 pm UTC (link)
I should really be careful not to read stuff here while sitting at university... :P

I'm amazed how much atmoshere you put in so few words. Simply awesome. ^___^

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[info]dream_berry
2006-05-06 06:02 am UTC (link)
I love the vivid descriptions! The images came alive for me. A wonderfully written story ^^

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LOVE!!!
[info]hydevilist
2006-05-07 10:39 am UTC (link)
GREATNESS!!! The words really strong. I LOVE IT XD

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[info]nebula_sprout
2006-05-09 06:53 am UTC (link)
If I could write like that I could die happy.

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